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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:11浏览次数:10396
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题目:It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.把全部鸡蛋放到一个篮子里是不明智的。
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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;作者在句法层面做的很棒;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

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It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket As an old saying goes"It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket."It demonstrates that when you put all things together,eggs are breakable easily so that you cannot conserve all.The famous remark warns someone who should do things one by one that you can do every thing well.If you do all things together,you will feel tired and can't pay attention to each thing so that this things will be terrible. As far as I am concerned,focus on one thing is important for you to do it well and it will be benefit for you in the future so you can easily succeed.For example,when you are walking at the street as well as looking your telephone,It is dangerous to take notice of the cars around you.As a student in collage,it is my time to focus on everything to improve my attainmentend access to success. From what have been discussed,centralized labor force is one of the most important things in life.So it is everyone's duty to be focused.

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