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【题目要求】
A person you know is planning to move to your town or city. What do you think this person would like and dislike about living in your town or city? Why? Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.
【题目分析】
这是一个讨论假设问题的题目。尽量展开想象。注意：不要只说my city，要指出你所在城市的名字， 比如：Beijing, Shanghai等等。人们会喜欢的有：女人喜欢商场;男人可能喜欢书店;大的公园、动物园;名胜古迹;文化氛围；人们会讨厌的有：交通堵塞;空气不新鲜;大城市的排外主义(exclusivism)、不友善(unfriendly);作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；请作者增加学术词汇的使用，单词拼写更认真些；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。
Sichuan is noted as 'Land of Abandance'.The famous actor Zhang Yimou said that Chengdu is a city where those people who travel there don't want to leave. Chengdu has many advantages which makes many people like there.First, Chengdu is the largest city in Sichuan and develop well.There has been many natural park and places of interest.Huanglongxi and Du Fu Thatched Cottage are two famous human landscapes. People will acquire much information from the two sites about the history they have never known.Second,Chengdu is a modern and fashionable city.It is common that many girls wearing beautiful and fashionable clothes are seen in the street.What's more,as many famous companies and supermarkets has stood there, people can buy whatever you really want conveniently.Third,Chengdu is a plain and has a good climate which isn't too hot or too cold,which is very suitable for people to live.At the same time,the slower speed of living is the other facter that people like Chengdu. However,Chengdu still has some demerits.I would like to list two ones. Firstly,the heavy traffic is a big problem for people to go out. If one has no one private car, he will spend more time in his going and firth from work.Secondly,although the climate isn't extramely cold or hot, it is very moist. From what has been discussed above,people will be aware of the Chengdu more or less. Chengdu maybe isn't a ferfect city,but when one who has gone there like there.
