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Dear Mr.Johnson, 23th December Hai i am wang hai yang ,i write to you is want tell you we dont get500 pruduct ,We get the 3000 proucts in 22th Deceber ,but, according to our signing of the No.35order. the proucts should 3500,hwoever,we arenot get 500 todoy ,please check your product list ,we are looking forward to your early reply . Wang Hai yang E-mail:salel-department @hotmail.com