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Seeing is not believing.If you come to a conclusion intently when you see or hear something,you may make a mistake in most situations and you may act like a idiot and show you ignorance and rude.Last week,my English teacher sent us a vivid class about your attitude to judge a person.You cannot judge a book by its cover,so it is stupid to have a quick judgement without having a further knowing.When he gave us a piece of paper where there were a lot of pictures of many people in the world,and he required us to judge the occupation of them from their look and the first impression they gave to you.We thought it might be easy but finally we found it so difficult and we did dreadfully.Through this class,I learned we need to be more patient to know the truth and we cannot harry to get a conclusion.
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