2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

作者应适量增加从句的使用量；文中存在一些拼写错误，还请增加词汇量的积累，；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

Everyone have dream,but how let dream become true that they do not know,that is to say,the way to success.I think the way to success have to posession tow parts. At first,the diligience is must posession.For example,take leraning english as to example,leraning a foreign language is vary difficult,it is a proce of accumulate,that is to say,you are hard work to become sucess,if you are not diligience that is not success.Second,the persistence is very inportant,if you had diligience but wis not persistence that can not success. In a world,the diligience and persisence is must to dream become true and success.