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2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:48浏览次数:3007
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题目 The Way to Success
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1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes

2.Write a short essay entitled The Way Success

字数:150满分:100分

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Everyone have a dream,but how let dream become true that they do not know,that is to say,the way to success.I think the way to success have to possession tow parts. At first,the diligence is must possession.For example,take learning english as to example,learning a foreign language is vary difficult,it is a proce of accumulate,that is to say,you are hard work to become success,if you are not diligence that is not success.Second,the persistence is very important,if you had diligence but wis not persistence that can not success. In a world,the diligence and persistence is must to dream become true and success.

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