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There is a fable in China that three people spreading reports of a tiger make you believe there is one around.And now we all know there isn't a tiger.But why people would believe a lie heard in the past?Even now we will come to conclusion immeditely once saw or heard.so I think this is a unwise way in which you don't think twice.
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