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Should Private Car Owners Be Taxed For Pollution? Nowadays as the booming of the high technology and the development of people's life level, private car has become the basic transportaion tool. Consequently, it has contributed to the air pollution and worsen the enviroment. So the govenors are arguing to put a pollution tax on private cars . However, different people hold different ideas, someone think it is a good idea to protect the enviroment, and others regard it as useless duty. From my point of view, it could be practical for the following three reasons. The first reason is that by putting this tax on the gas emission of private cars, people will consider the cost when they plan to have a travel by their car, and they may decide to go to a trip by bus instead of by the private car. This can form an awareness of enviroment protection in people'minds. Meanwhile by conducting the pollution tax , the amount of gas emission will definitely drop. As a result, the air would become fresher and people will not suffer form the gas
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