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nowadays it is common people to accept the moral lesson to enhance the moral qual.so there is brief that it is important to accept the lesson about it and i think this argument is true to some extent. there are numerous reasons why i suupor this opinion,and i would explore a few of the most impornant ones here.it is make them so coo to do it .if soimeone don,t follow this can be harmed by it.as a matter of fact,the best way to do it let the all the p to fight again moral standard behaviour .