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the novel titles is the million pound note by mark twain which tells a story about the american poor boy called henry adams in london,s advenyure.there are two rich man an This story tells the story of an American poor boy Henry Adams in London's bet give a cheque to him and see him how it end in a month.henry didn,t stare or arresyed but become a millionaire and won the love of a beautiful young lady .the language style is hunman and satire
