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【题目要求】
It's better for students to live away from home when they at university than to live with parents，agree or disagree ?
【题目讲解】
学校学习的好处，是不是就是老师的功能?上过课的翻翻笔记吧亲爱的们~传道授业解惑，老师的优势专业训练，互动教学过程。然而家长教育，1.家庭环境更轻松，家长可能更耐心，2.家长可以言传身教对不对~但是!有缺陷吗?1.家长可能教育比较随性，没有方法，小孩子接受起来不一定好，效率不高。2.而且家长的知识有限对不?3.家里的设备也有限。不像学校多媒体呀，同学互相帮助呀，图书馆呀等等。
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the issue whether students live away fromn home or live with their parents rasid hot debate .on the one hand ,the rapid development of science and technolog and accelerating social change brings about much r=tension and nervousness to human beings,so much p likely o feel comfotable to live with their paremts to study.on the other jand ,most students were used o live with their parents .living an honorable life and being taught how to confront difficult situations ,theeforce,they are more vulnerable to sy=uch triubles as a lose love or tought from other walks of live. i think that both parents and students must attach more importance to students to the ability of living independence is good cjhoice for them .more importantly,they should know how and where to suit fot them when they have psychological problems
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