高一英语作文模拟题:写信介绍中秋节

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it is very popular with everyone to spent this festival with their famlies . it is becoming more and more important in our life and it is becom the common activity that most people like to take part in when family get together .we would like to have a holiday to family reunion and have dinner together .w e would like to eat the mooncake and admie the full moon .when we are thuis specuial time in our life ,we also want to go out to enjoy the beautiful moon with our families.when we are sad,we hope to go to there and bresh the fresh air and relax oueselves .it is good time for us