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2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(69):防止空气污染

发布时间:2015-01-29 14:50浏览次数:674
要求:
写作内容
你们班级举行了一场关于空气污染与人类健康的讨论会。请根据下列提示,写一篇关于如何防止空气污染的文章。
要点提示:
减少工厂污染气体的排放。
植树造林。
采用环保交通方式及利用新能源等。
写作要求
1、注意:要对要点进行适当拓展,比如:解释、说明、补充、举例等,使行文连贯。不能逐字翻译。
2、字数:100左右,开头已给出,不计入字数。

3、参考词汇:排放:give offvt.空气: atmospheren.


As we know, our health is closely connected with the degree of air pollution. Our air has become polluted and it is high time we took action to slow down the air pollution.
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拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

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As we know, our health is closely connected with the degree of air pollution. Our air has become polluted and it is high time we took action to slow down the air pollution. In my opinion, there are some effective ways we can follow to prevent air pollution. First of all, we should lessen the emission of polluted gas. With the development of economy, lots of factories are producing large number of products with discharging great dirty gas which is polluting our air greatly. In addition, we should plant trees and beauty our forest. As we all know, green trees can beautify our air during their growth. Besides, we should also follow the environmental transportation methods and apply new resources. The vehicle cars are producing lots of dirty gas everyday. If we can take the bus or ride a bicycle to school or company, our air will not be polluted violently. All in all, these three ways are good for us to follow. I believe that our air will be clean if we take these measures day by day.

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