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My school I have a beautiful school. It's near my home. I always walk to school everyday. My school is not so big, but it's clean and there are many flowers and grass in our school. There are 10 classrooms and two office rooms in our school. I like our playground very much. We can play basketball and volleyball with my classmates together. We always enjoy ourselves a lot in our playground. I like to water the flowers and grass after class, because there are many birds and butterflies around me when I do it. This is something about y school.