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Nowadays,online shopping has become populour with people of all ages who surf on the internet. Of course,people will do nothing without any reason and here are some advantages of purchasing online.First,goods are sold in a much lower price than that of those in shopping malls,from which result people could save money for other things they longed for.Second,consumers could reduce the time spent onshopping,since we can buy anything obtained just by clicking on the button on the screen.Last but not least online shopping has come into the fashion and if you do not do it you may be thought of out of time.However,one coin has two sides,problems along with it can not be ignored as well.We can not touch the thing we want which is possible for us to buy something in poor quaility.Another problem lies in the process of packing and transpoortation.It is unavoidable for you purchases to get damaged.The plastics and papers uesed for packing are in a large number,iI think this is very bad to environment.
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