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Nowadays,online shopping has become popular with people of all ages who surf on the internet. Of course,people will do everything for a reason and here are some advantages of purchasing online. First,goods are sold in a much lower price than that of those in shopping malls,from which result people could save money for other things they longed for.Second, less time would be spent on shopping,since we can buy anything attainable just by clicking on the button on the screen.Last but not least online shopping has come into a fashion and if you do not do it you may be thought of out of time. However,one coin has two sides,problems along with it can not be ignored very much.We can not touch the thing wanted,which is possible for us to buy something to the poor quality.Another problem lies in the process of packing and transportation.It is unavoidable for the purchases to get damaged.The plastics and papers,both of which I think are bad to the environment used for packing are in a large number. In my opinion,though there are many shortings in online shopping,it is very useful to our daily lives.We ought to make good use of it instead of rejecting it.
