新东方托福高分作文:如何花钱?

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I agree with the statement above, which is children should learn to manage their own money. First of all, adults give children limited pocket money. For instance, children have limited money to buy the thing the want, so they have to manage how to use the money evenly, so that they will have money at the end of the month. There is a problem which happens on one of my friends. She has two hundreds pocket money for each month, but she doesn't have any money left in the middle of the month. So she has to borrow money from others. The reason which cause her problem is she doesn't manage her money well in the beginning of the month. Maybe she spends most all her money one day and she doen't consider about the rest of the month. Lots of children have this problem, so I think children should learn to manage their own money and have a good habit. Secondly, children are not supposed to depend on the adults when they are turning to adult Children should think about if they grow up and their parents won't take care of all their personal stuff, they have to know how to manage the money in their life. They have to use moeny to survive, for example, if I spend most of my salary for the first half of the month, I won't have money to buy food and the daily things I need for the rest of the month, and that will be a serious thing. Thirdly, it's important for children to have a good habit when they are young. Children can learn to calculate how much money they can spend for each day or they can make a plan, like if I spend less money today, I can spend more money tomorrow. There are lots of method children can use for managing money, so it's necessary for them to explore their own ideas. Therefore, children should learn to manage their own money at a young age for being an adult in the future. Children should not depend on their parents that they should learn to be an adult and have a good habit to manage their own things.