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作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升,学术词汇使用过少;建议适当增加些复杂句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。
Nowadays, there has appeared several ways to save money when people is consuming. As students, most of time, in order to buy more things we usually chose some ways which can save money. Such as group-buydeals , coupons or a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. in my opinion, i think these ways of consuming would not make us smart consumers.