2009年12月英语四级作文真题:建设绿色校园

学术词汇能比较准确的使用，不过拼写错误稍多；能够使用一些不错的从句；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

in todays,s fast paced world ,creating a green campus is a world issue .recently,school across china have been plagued by a series of measures to ensure the the environment of the school and make the school look more beautiful. improving school environment is not as simple as hiring a guard at the schol gate .but reather it means a good approach to developing a en among it.all these activities should be involved and to solve school security issue together.so it is necessary to go it . in my opinion,it is not just the school,s responsibility ,society as a whole should work togther to ensure a good en for studets