请作者加强词汇表达的灵活性,但文中有较多拼写错误;可适当增加从句和复杂句的使用,注意文中的几处句子错误;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
nowadays it is comon for students don,t pay much attention to the spell the letter .so there is a brief that there are a percent of young people enjoy the reading the foreign famous book but don,t how to spell it .this has led to a heated argument as to whether it is wise to makl=ke choice to poay attention to the spelling .it is unwise to how to go it . there are numerous resons why i support this opinion,and i would explore a few of the most important ones here.to start with,it is difficult to write a long sentence .one canhardly know the real context to use the words .a self claimed have good grammar knowledge but cannt Correctly spelled words.it sound ridiculous when witnesss this situation.furthermore ,it canbe risky to use the words to amake the long sentence. cearlty,it is vital to use the speel.people should be couraged to develop it in real life