2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

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there is no doubt that many parents help children everything .it has become a huge problem .what factors lead to this phenomenon and what what we can do to sole this problem have become a concern to many people . the goal of children is high level of ability about how to deal with the problem of whje they are in trouble .it is not just let the chldren to pass the examination in their life but let them know the living knowledge and the ways of the world .respoect them and let them select their way tolive.it can let them learn to communication and gain more self confidence.at the same time ,students can learn a variety of personal experience .