2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

句法知识不错，多多加强复杂句的练习；希望学术词汇的使用能更熟练一些，还要加强单词拼写的检查；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。

with the ever use of the internet .online shopping is growing tremendously.people now can buy everything on the internet raging from foods ,books ,cloything to furniture, the most impormatnt advamtage of onlibe shopping is its covience .it allow consumers to shop at home with 24 hour access save time traving to retail stires.also,consumers can exchange information online through chatting and discussion forums to help them make a wiser and better decision.but it has disadvantages as well.privacy and security are the top comcern of consumers .many consumerrs are worried about credit and frauds.