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小学三年级英语作文:My school

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:55浏览次数:5964
要求:
用英语描述下自己的学校,字数在100字以内。
用户的作文(系统评分55.0分
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正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;文中词汇表达稍欠丰富,可是单词拼写做的不错;文章上下文衔接不是很紧凑,结构缺少组织;请注意分段。

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My school is very beautiful. It is in zhenben, near the Qiandeng Lake. Do you know it? It is Nanhai Experimental Primary School. I like my school very much.   There is a big playground in my school. We have P.E. class on the playground and we often play sports on it , too. Our teaching building has five floors. My classroom is on the fifth floor. It is big and clean. The computer rooms are on the third floor. There is a library on the second floor. There are many books in the library. I often read books here. There are some music rooms and art rooms in the teaching building, too. The teachers in my school are very kind . The students are very polite and smart. I am happy in my school.

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