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Today,we are positing a big breaking in the information society,a wealth of information creates a poverty of attention.How are doing a chioce, as youngers or social people,we got through a variaties of ways,such as the internet,newspaper,QQ,send message,chatted with other.if we can do a chioce to know realty information. On other hand,they via newspaper that it is really,because newspaper from many professional people,this people stand for power and fact,so they persist that.However,on anther hand,they persist that internet,newspaper,QQ,send message,chatted with other,thanks to they like network bring in planty convinent,therefore,them thought that internet let us can able to want to do events, but they didn't to do,before. In my perspective,i am agree that the last later,since social information coming,we should absorb a new society bring to advandages and avoid harmful message,we are afford changing ourself to access new views and news.
