3、词数100词以上,文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文中词汇表达稍欠丰富,可是单词拼写做的不错;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。
under the pressure of learning she felt so worried due to take the test frequently.secondly,she has lots of homework and even have no time to play.so she can,t banance the work and play which make her so exhausted .to tackle the problem of it ,every possible solution should be tried.u can communication with u parents or u best friends and lose no time to study ,it means Planning and time consuming.