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①温州是一个美丽的城市，位于中国的东部（in eastern China），气候温暖（warm）, 准备轻便的衣服。（light clothes）②有很多美丽的风景，比如雁荡山（Yandang Moutains）和南麂岛（Nanji Island）等。③ 靠近大海，可以品尝海鲜（seafood）④交通方便⑤这里的人很友好,并且你很愿意做她的导游。
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it is beauty city lies in in eastern china duo to latitude the weather is warm that make u felt comfortable from to time.whenu go there ,u should prepare for the light clothes in order to suitable for the weather in there.three are many magnificent scenery make u enter wonderland .it is near the sea so u can taste the delicious food .the traffic is convenient as well as the people here. i would be happy to be the guide here .
