2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

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I'am glad to kown that you can visit my hometown. First of all,welcome to Baoji,China.Then,I will pick up you to my home.Do you know what is FaMen teomp,which is a wonderful place to go sightseeing.By the way,you could not image the big build.Whata great religious build.With the surrounds,the tree and flowers will make you fell exicted.More important.