2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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As we can see form picture above,they earn more money who have got higher education.On the contract,the others earn less money. In all educate levels ,professional degree educates are the most good developing foresight.their earnings are further higher than average earnings which is 797 dollars.As the same as, the one who own professional degree only has 2.4 unemployment rate,but the average of unemployment rate in 2011 is 2.4%. As far as I can see,getting more higher education ,you will have more beauty future.