小学三年级英语作文:When I grow up

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with the tiimes go,every one will grow up and should hold the dream.when i gowd up i want to be a wise businessmen.why i have this idea ,because of the money,one day,if i get a lot of money and it has the lost ,i will donate a part of it to help who need help.