2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

在平时练习中应增加词汇量的积累；作者词汇量偏小，且文章中拼写错误较多；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

my dear friend: first,welcome to my hometome.when i hear that you will come to my hometown.i am very suprise and very happy.hear that,you will ask me why.now,let me tell you. my hometown is a very good and beautiful place.there are many motains and rival.when you come there,the frist place i want to go with you that my home.we are friends many years ago,but you did not go to my home.i want to have this chance to go home with you.this is a good chance. my hometown have a good and notable place.it is huangguoshu rival.i hope you will very like it .you are my best friend and my only foreignfriend.i want to dare someting with you about my home tome,i hope you have a good ship in my hometown. in a word,my hometown is a good place,welcome to my hometown.i am look forward to your this shiping.follow me,let me have a good ship.then,hope you have a good body.see you .