高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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In the past,my hometown surrouned with green trees.The river is clearly and fishs play happiness.Not only the house was break yet the load was small,but also people was poor.But now,the house is tall,the load packed with all kinds of vehicles.While ,there have a trouble we needed solve,the environment is polluted,the tree is descread,the fish is died out.