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文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;文章在句法方面做的很棒,从句和复杂句的使用不错;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
To Be a Smart Consumer People always want to save money as much as we can, especially our students.We have no job but ask for our parents to support our lives. We have to collect all kinds of coupons and wait for the season sale to buy what we want and what we need. Obviously they are good ways to save our money and make us to be a smart consumer. In my life,as a college student, I always go shopping on-line. Because you can buy products easily and have good prices. when I travel with my friends, we book one room that we can share for the most part, and we often have group-buy deals. Save more money can let us experience more beautiful views and delicious foods. I often buy dresses and skirts in the winter and warm coats in the summer as well. To be a smart consumer not only means just care about the prices and money, but it is all that you can enjoy it and be satisfied about your life style. I like my way to save money and I think I'm a smart consumer.