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字数：300 满分：100分
熟练使用了一些长难句；作者能较灵活地使用词汇，学术词汇使用较恰当，但存在一些拼写错误；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
For many stdutents,they are indgulgeing in the pleasure of shopping,they always attracted by many colorful goods.But for their economic situation,they do not have enough money to pay it.So,they always choosing some special ways,such as coupons and group-buy.Maybe this is a good channel to buy goods,but from where I stand,I think this is a immature bahaviour. On the one hand,it would make me spend more money,the coupons and group-buy just a channel of shopper to sale goods,exactly,we did not get any special price.on the other hand,as a students,our money are paid by ou parents,and we dont any ability to make it,so,we need to keep a habit of save money and this will bring a lot of benefits to our future life. All in all,this consume ways is not smart,we need to get a good consume habit.
