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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8984
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For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

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“it is unwise to judge a person by their appearance" obsolute as it may sound ,the saying is quite sensible . it tell us that we can't judge a person by their appearance. however,in reality ,most people are fond of judging a person by their appearance .how terrible it is !it is unwise.There may be no better example than happening to our life .For example ,it is know to us that the example of mayun .he has a ugly appearance with low body .But he is a succed man .he has built a company ,which is bring a great deal of rich.Therefore ,there is no point in judging a person by their appearance .we would never konw someone whether he or she will be succed in the future.it is no use for judging a person by their appearance.

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