可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量,注意几处拼写错误;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
Nowadays,we are in the times of information explosion .there are much information on the internent which can get through the finger.it's convenient for us to get relevant information from internent.but when we look through the messages we are often distracted by other unimportant imformation,and sometimes we can't chose the correct information because there are much interrelated information on the internent. so how to chose the correct information with least time and how to avoid being distracted by irrelevant informaton? here is my answer. please consider what's your assigmet before you open the computer.then limit your time to complish your task.which can promote you to concentrate on your task. in order to get useful information we best go to the official website . and before use information we need to think twice .