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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):信息爆炸

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:09浏览次数:5752
要求:
Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay about the impact of the information explosion by referring to the saying "A wealth of information creates a poverty of attention. You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you can do to avoid being distracted by irrelevant information. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
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可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量,注意几处拼写错误;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays,we are in the times of information explosion .there are much information on the internent which can get through the finger.it's convenient for us to get relevant information from internent.but when we look through the messages we are often distracted by other unimportant imformation,and sometimes we can't chose the correct information because there are much interrelated information on the internent. so how to chose the correct information with least time and how to avoid being distracted by irrelevant informaton? here is my answer. please consider what's your assigmet before you open the computer.then limit your time to complish your task.which can promote you to concentrate on your task. in order to get useful information we best go to the official website . and before use information we need to think twice .

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