单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;但从句使用不熟练,注意平时练习中多积累;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。
My new teacher is math teacher.He is very strong. He have a big mouth, and a small eyes, he usually wear glasses, and a not big and not small nose. He often wear a black new ski nrt and brown pants, with two big shoes. he is very kind.And he is so smart.he is so funny, we are happy.