Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
句式变化多样;作者词汇量偏少,不过单词拼写方面做的不错;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。
Nowadays more and more people like use cellphone ,they think live without cellphone life will be fill with darkness.So they use the phone anywhere and any time ,even when they across the busy blocks .What is worse,someone even using walking sticks in order to see,it's so dangerous ,In my opinion it's too foolish to over using it ,because we can use the time to contact with others it's helpfui.
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