可增加从句和复杂句的使用;作者学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间,词汇表达灵活性也要提高,单词拼写错误较多;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
How to improve students's mental health There is no doubt that student's mental health plays an sinificant role in their study and daily life.We should attach much attention to student's mental health. For the part of school departure,a serise of measure should be taken such as organizing some consulting departures,some consert about how to deal with mental problems. For the part of students themselves,which is also the most important part,they should get along well with their mental issues,dealing with themselves at first as possible as they can,and then try to talk with the eldlies. With all measues into ptatise,I deeply wish all of us can cope wih mental problems,and living together with a good mood.