丰富从句的使用,文章会更出色;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
How to improve students's mental health There is no doubt that student's mental health plays a significant role in their study and daily life.We should attach much importance to student's mental health. For the part of school departure,a serise of measure should be taken such as organizing some psycological counselting departures,some chairs about how to deal with mental problems as well as advice from psycological teachers. For the part of students themselves,which is the most important part,they should get along well with their mental issues,dealing with themselves at first as possible as they can,however sometimes dealing problems only by youselves doesn't work . If it did,we could turn to others for help,like trying to talk to the elders. With all measures into pratise,I wish all of us could get rid of psycological garbage,and living together with a good mood.