雅思写作范文:城市交通问题

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there is no doubt that the dramatic development of road traffic has become a huge problem,both in cities and on motorays everywhere.what facts leads to this problem and what we can do to solve the problem have become a concern to many people. i think various reasons may lead to the high volumes of road traffic.to srart with,as a result of develooppment of the automobile industry ,cars have become affordable to ordinary people.whose income has also grow significantly in recent tears .on tpo of that ,in many cities ,a considerable percent of young poeople need to travlel to woirk on wekends and spend weeekends in the country side,so cars have become necessities for them.furthermore,he policy of developing economy should be reasonsible for some urban issues including traffic congestion.in order to stimulate domestic construction ,the public are encouraged to own their private cars,but in metropolices with dense population ,such policy definitely leads to more vehicles on roads