雅思写作范文:出国旅游的利弊

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to start with,easier and cheaper air travel has made a significamtly difference to human benings.traveling around the world could expand p,d horizons and stimulate their love of life and they will also be more productive at work.moreover ,managrs of companies could visit foreign markets more conveniently than before and as a result,they could locate potential target mareket and sell goods or buy materials from there if the price in=s competitve enough. if a company could flourish this way ,employees will benefit and socialty will be more stable and harmonious.if more and more people are afordavle opportubities to go to oither countries,thee willl be less misunderstandin and more respect among countrues.