2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

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DON'T MAKE BECISIOUS DIRECTLY WHEN YOU KNOW IT There is an increasing phenomenon that young people prefer to make their own ideas as soon as they see or heard it.But is it a correct way for all of us to solve problems? It is universally acknowledged that making a directly judgement can save quantities of time.However,so it is that this decisious has more chances to make us fell guilty.The idea we made which stands up our oppoion is a perfect way to communicate with others. On the other hand,there is no doubt that a thinkful conclusion can easily make others fell we are clever.Furthermore，only when we think twice can we make a more correct decision.