作者句法基础不错,可适当增加复杂句的使用;作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
DON'T MAKE BECISIOUS DIRECTLY WHEN YOU KNOW IT There is an increasing phenomenon that young people prefer to make their own ideas as soon as they see or heard it.But is it a correct way for all of us to solve problems? On the one hand,it is universally acknowledged that making a directly judgement can save quantities of time.However,so it is that this decisious has more chances to make us unhappy.What's more,the idea we made which stands up our opinion is a perfect way to communicate with others. On the other hand,there is no doubt that a thoughtful conclusion can easily make others fell we are clever.Furthermore,only when we think twice can we make a more correct decision.
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