文章学术词汇表达灵活,还要注意词汇拼写的检查;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
most chinese students are familiar with the saying that english is more important .with people having more opportunities to learn from it and want to have a better life we need read much more book about english magazines and newspapers .of the various benefits of it can make us learn more about foreign culture. it is definitely a relaxing experience,,.when we learn english ,we tend to feel nothng but relaxed.it is a enjoyable exoerience for us .we can gain knowledge about the culture and history of dofferent from us .understading and appreciating different culture ,i become more tolerent. the benefit of ut have long been rtecognized.i should learn more when opportunities are available .