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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12939
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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句式变化较丰富,若注意文中个别句子错误会更棒;作者词汇量比较丰富,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活,但要避免出现拼写错误;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

This picture describes an authentic scene of a pairs parents making the used a computer to chat with their child.Since we found many problems,the way communicates with people that whether have an impact on , whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact,this problems is seen as the mainly issue. Throuth survery,some scentifists consider that the way electronic communication hasn't large impact,contary,this way can improve face-to-face,because it can able to say our heart.Of course,this opion of a partly people.else's believe that it can be badly. Personally, i solid insist that not only is it,also better.The internet bring to the large information,technology,it achieved electronic business include:B2B,B2C and C2C and so on patterns,what's more,it decreased people sistance.

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