2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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its true that downloading essays is very commom today,because of the great development of internet.However ,it is ok for us to download essays? significantly,not only people who have poor skills in writing essays but people who major in literature download essays and use them.for example,we once found that the chairman of Faculty of arts read an essay downloaded from internet as his own speech draft .Maybe he was too busy to write his own speech draft,but we can guess many people rely on downloading essays too much.