如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;文中词汇较灵活,但要注意积累学术词汇,拼写错误也要注意;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。
Its important to say that not few students download essays.recompose them and then hand in as their theses.What is worse?we have ever heard some professors plagiarized of faked others' academic theses.Those two phenomanons appear because we can download essays without limitation. Clearly,there is no reason for us to download essays.Why do i think so?If we do not want to copy others' essays,there is no need for us download them.Moreover,we would be sued for the crime of infringing copyright if we copied essays without permittion.