拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;可适当增加从句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。
significantly, not only people who have poor skills in writing essays but people who major in literature download essays and use them. For example, we once found that the chairman of Faculty of arts read an essay downloaded from internet as his own speech draft .Maybe he was too busy to write his own speech draft, but we can guess many people rely on downloading essays too much.