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Its important to say that not few students download essays. recompose them and then hand in as their theses. What is worse? We have ever heard some professors plagiarized of faked others' academic theses. Those two phenomenon appear because we can download essays without limitation.its true that downloading essays is very common today, because of the great development of internet. However ,it is ok for us to download essays?