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its true that downloading essays is very common today, because of the great development of internet. However ,it is ok for us to download essays? significantly, not only people who have poor skills in writing essays but people who major in literature download essays and use them. For example, we once found that the chairman of Faculty of arts read an essay downloaded from internet as his own speech draft .Maybe he was too busy to write his own speech draft, but we can guess many people rely on downloading essays too much. Its important to say that not few students download essays. recompose them and then hand in as their theses. What is worse? We have ever heard some professors plagiarized of faked others' academic theses. Those two phenomenon appear because we can download essays without limitation. Clearly, there is no reason for us to download essays. Why do i think so? If we do not want to copy others' essays, there is no need for us download them.Moreover,we would be sued for the crime of infringing copyright if we copied essays without permission.
